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joy... try number two by =kittie-chan:iconkittie-chan:



a beating heart
never sounded so sweet
before yours became the one to focus on

have your father's eyes
let your feelings change
with the same intensity of the ocean

test your limits
letting the wind lead you
on your journey of life
©2008 =kittie-chan
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kay... i've been fretting over this for the past 3 days. here it is. i may change it later. please give critiques.

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~Salva-Veritate:iconSalva-Veritate: Apr 15, 2008, 6:07:48 PM
I like the draft of the stanza better.. So far its good... wow.. ^^!

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=kittie-chan:iconkittie-chan: Apr 15, 2008, 7:05:34 PM
which one did you like better. the one in the () or before.

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~Salva-Veritate:iconSalva-Veritate: Apr 15, 2008, 7:38:39 PM
The one in ()

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“Does feminist mean large unpleasant person who'll shout at you or someone who believes women are human beings. To me it's the latter, so I sign up.”

~Margaret Atwood